Dare to touch the skin
You’ll see yourself ablaze
You’d find the blood dripping
Unbeknownst whose it is
You’d see the clouds shrouding the stars
And hear the thunder scream
The orb flipping its spin
The sun setting in the east.
Dare to touch the heart
You’ll feel the passion flame
And the blood coagulate itself
From her sacrificing blood
Find the stars staring at you
Hear the drizzle and smell petrichor
The earth finding itself in the galaxy
The sun with its shine rising again.
Dare to touch the soul
You’ll feel the ice dousing the flames
The blood reversing its drop
Leading their way to her part
You’ll get to touch the stars
And hear her love in murmur of the rain
You’d realise yours is the universe
With her being the million constellations.
Sorry for being absent for so long. Love you all and miss reading you. I’d try my best to keep up with your posts though I am still stuck in my entrance exams and I won’t be free till end of May. Urrgghh!! And thank you loads for all the award Nominations and lovely comments. Your love truely keeps me going.
This is an exquisite piece soaked with emotions and adorned with the perfect use of words. This is beautiful!! Loved the last paragraph!!
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Thank you Riddhima for your loving words. πππ Even in your comments your personality, your thoughts shine through.
XX.
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Awe! Thank you so much.πβ€ It means a lot , especially when coming from you!!ππ
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And it’s all my pleasure, My Sweetheart. ππ
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Al love poem.
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And I meant * a lovely poem.
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Many many thanx. βΊβΊβΊ
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Such a wonderful piece! Much luck to you!
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Thank you loads for the feedback.π
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Good Luck β€π
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Meri pyari behna, how have you been?
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Ammmmmmaaaaaazzzzing !!!! It’s Vacations! So I’m relieved!!! Btw you don’t stress out ha! I’ll you’ll rock the exam! ππ
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Phew!!! Jee le behna! Class 10 ka boards tha right? Then toh 11 now. Study time ahead!!!!
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Hehehe! π
Yaaaa! πΆπΆπΆ
I’m too tensed and too excited too! ππ
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Don’t be tensed. Just be excited. ππ
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Hehehe yeee!!! So do you too! ππ
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Oh I dare.π
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You know, there are 3 dares in this case. Which one do you choose?
p.s. are we playing TDS as in Truth Dare Situation?
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I choose all the three.
P.s. if you so wish.
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And Sinchan may. πππ
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Choose one.
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Arreyyy poem hamari hai…aap karo choose.
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Toh truth!
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A very difficult question for you then. Aaaj tak jitne bhi singers aur bands ki gaane sune ho…un saare k naam batao. ALL OF THEM. U r not alllowed to miss out one single name.
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Woh dare hai pagliπ
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nai pagol truth hai. π
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It’s both. I accept neither.π
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not doneeeeeeeee!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Ja pagli
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gayi na out of the box?
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Kabki
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I love this. So beautiful
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Thank you for being the encouraging one as always. πππ
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This is so beautifully written^^
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Thank you Antsa. π π π
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you re welcome^^
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π π π π
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Good job Charisma. Good luck to your entrance exam. Have an awesome day!
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Thanx loads Rhed!ππ
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This is so lovely, dear Moni! Such profound use of words. Good luck on your exams!
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Thank you Winnie. β€ β€ β€ β€
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You’re welcome! πβ€οΈ
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Omg!! So long poemππ
Beautifully written by my lovliest sisterπππ
All lucks & success to you and give the best baaki take restππ
Last exam kab hai?
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MERE GYANI GUNI BHAIA, THANK YOU LOADS AND LOADS. β€ β€
I am sitting only for my State Joint and JEE. Advanced ki bole toh woh May 20th ko hai. So it's far far away and too long a time to study. Arrgghhh!
P.S. How have you been?
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I am doing goodππ
I thought my lil behna had gave up on blogging..haahaa however good to see you back( itni lambi poem ke saath)
Koi ni 20th may yeh raha..fir its gonna be lot of fun(college days are the best experience of life)
Enjoy vacations, have fun alongwith studies & do let me know exam kaise hueππππ°π
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nai nai I won’t give up blogging. Prasant ko tang karna kaise chor du? π π π I am happily alive, mere gyani guni vrata. π π
And it’s not such a long poem, rather mere sabse chote walo mei se ek. π π π π π
Can’t wait for college! π π
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Haha…if this is among short poems toh badi poems toh khatarnaak hongiπππ i’ll read your rest of the poems too and mujhe tang karne waale hi ache lagte haiπ π
Ye baat…ache se exam de de bass fir college mein sab tension over.ππ
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Khatarnak? ππππππ
You’ll read?? OMG! Thank u thank u soooo much. β€ β€ β€
Aur aab toh definitely zyada tang karenge hum aapko. πππππ
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I am not able to write long poetries so whenever i read long one’s, felt amazed as i know it is not easy & its talent.
Haha…choti you’re all free jitna bhi tang karna hoππ
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Na bhaiya, it’s just the flow of thoughts.
Shorter ones are rather challenging for me. It’s like I have to contain my thoughts and I can’t blabber on and on. ha ha! π π
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Exactly it depends upon the flow of words and long one’s have space of much blabberingππ
Its a challenge to write poetry either long or short and you’re doing lovely work on both the versions so keeeep writing & have a great day ahead( vacations hai )π π π
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Vacation? πππππ and thanx loads again.πππ
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Profound! You’ve managed to execute the powerful combination of words throughout the beginning until the end. Well-penned Charisma!β€
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Thank you Graci for your wonderful and encouraging comment. πππ
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You are welcome Charisma. ππ»
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beautiful poem xo
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THANK YOU. π
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Woowww!! The disparate forms of touch that you have described so exceptionally through your poem is marvelous. It is chilling when it should be and equally soothing in commensurate with the type touch.. bravo!!
Inappropriate touches can reverse the existence of the universe. And touching a soul, just like how this work of yours did, is blissful!!!πππππ
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And I need to say that this comment makes my day. I’ve read this for around 5 times in the last 3 hours. Thank you Parth for this wonderful comment. You understood the very essence of this poem and what I tried to convey. There couldn’t have been a better summary of the poem and your words did the magic. π π π π π Thank you loads and loads Parth. π π
And yes it’s the soul we need to reach. π π π
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Hey wowww!!πβ€οΈπβ€οΈI have never seen a comment getting appreciation like this.. I am overwhelmed.. thank you so so much. And it was my pleasure to read such a magical creation by you!β€οΈππ
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And you make me smile once again. Thank you Parth. βΊβΊβΊ
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Yayyyyy!! Mission accomplished!!βοΈβΊοΈβΊοΈβοΈπ
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This is so intricately beautiful.
Well penned. π
And all the best for your entrance exams. π
Take care. π
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Thank you loads Enigma. π π π π Coming from you, it means a lot really. π π
Have a great day ahead! β€ β€
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You’re most welcome. π
I am just a normal person, nothing extraordinary or talented, such as…like yourself.
But, you are welcome, since you are too kind and sweet. ππ
Have a great evening yourself.
P.S. We are in the same geographic country, you know that right? π
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We are all normal human beings with the light of extra-ordinary talent shining within each of us. Every single of us. It’s the extra-ordinary in the ordinary.
So it’s my pleasure. π π π π
And sorry, I didn’t know that Enigma. So I’d better say a good night now. Sleep tight. Have enigmatic dreams. π π π
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Whoa, wow. So beautifully put. And then you say I am talented? Look who’s speaking?
And that’s alright. Nothing to apologize to.
The night has just begun and I have some writing to get to, like loooon overdue writings.
Good night to you, though. Sleep well.
Aha, smart, I see. Meanwhile, you have charismatic dreams.
Take Care. π
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Anything for your enigmatic soul! β€ β€ β€
Hope your writings are going great.
Charismatic dreams! aha! π π
p.s. just another nocturnal! π π
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You are too sweet. π
Actually, they are on hold. Unable to move ahead.
Yeah. π
P.S. High Five. π But I guess you must be the one studying. π
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Study on some days. If i don’t feel like studying, I’d blog hop! πππππ
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Sounds like a great plan to have. π
Waise bhi, you must be just revising, so not much effort.
Blog hops are pretty great. π
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kaunsa chor k kausa revise karu…that’s rather tough!
and yeah it’s actually helped me discover a lot of amazing blogs and be friends with many on this online platform. π π π
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You leaving something behind? Impossible. π
Itβs a great platform, innit? π
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It ofc is. πππππ
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No way. π
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You were the one thing in my way
You were the one thing in my way
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You didn’t even know we were in the same geographic region until yesterday. π
How can I be in your way?
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Arreeyyyy hum Calvin ka gana ga rahe the Enigma πππππ
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Oh yeah. Now I understood. π¬
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Ha ha ha!! ππππ
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Howβs your preparation ?
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Behna, I nominated you in a challenging! Take it!
https://ridiculousbharath.wordpress.com/2018/04/10/three-day-quote-challenge/
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omg omg omg! Thank you. Dhannyabad. Dhonnobad. Gracias…..I so wanted to do this.
Lekin thore baad karu. I mean I am not sure if I’ll be able to post for back-to-back three days because I’ll be absent from WordPress again for some days, now that I also have my state joint on 22nd. Exams k baad please?
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Hoja gayab! Din me kuch ghante rest bhi Liya karo. Apps delete karne se kuch nahi hone wala.
(Whatever you wish, princess!)
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Queen, Princess…..off hooo!!!
Arrey hum sotey hai. Minimum 8 hours sleep everyday. Sone ki siwa rahu kaise? And yes, deleting aaps works for me. I lose the urge to open them and that’s how i stop myself from getting distracted. I do the same with Whatsapp as well (deleted)
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Haha
I deleted the Facebook app, kept Instagram (on demand π) and never could delete WhatsApp (papa dantenge). Hum bhi 8 ghante sote hai.
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Fcaebook app is gone since last year. Phn pane k do mahina baad hi hum usey ura diye. π
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Eats up a lot of space.π
Aap fast hai.
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Gum kholte kaha Fb zyada. Lolπ
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Haha..lololπ
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This one reeks of passion, Manidipa. It’s awe inspiring and at the same time, melts the heart.
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And if my Sumedha says so, I’d happily accept. π π π π π Thank you yar! ππππππππ
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Umm… *Blushes* π
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By the way, how have you been and how was Mains? I strongly believe you nailed it, girl.
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I strongly believed i did after coming out of the exam hall. but ghar aake dekhi itna ganda ganda saare galti ki hai…apne aap ko thappar marni hai mujhe. I thought I’d do best in physics physics toh gaya kaam se! Arrgghhh. The only hope? I’ll qualify even if it’ll be below expectation. Aaakash k answers k sath tally kiye. around 150 aa raha hai where I expected it to be around 250. Yukkk!!!!
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Mani, agar tumne galti Kari hai toh kaafi saare bachcho ne kari hongi. It’s a competitive. Maine apne bohot saare dosto se poochha and everybody had the same feedback. Honestly, it’s a qualifying exam and it doesn’t matter how much you score if at the end you do manage to get selected. So take a chill pill!!βΊοΈ
P.s let’s not talk in Hindi. I kinda cringe typing hindi words in the Roman script π
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Okay okay. Done. A bengali heart understands you. ππππ Hindi ko rehn do. English hi thik hai. ππ
Actually feedbacks have been pretty same. The topper at our aakash centre who never got less than 250 but mostly above 300 has gone down to 200. My friends here in haldia have had same reactions of the exam not being so great. *sigh* and my mom is like aro besi kora hoye geche.
And thanks for your words Sumedha. βΊβΊ how are your preparations going?
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Don’t worry, you’ll be fine, I just know!
For JEE? I’m not preparing for it at all. I laid a condition that I’ll give that test only if my dad doesn’t check the result for I am absolutely sure there’s no way I’ll get it.
I’m preparing for NEET, though. It’s going fine.
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That’s some condition! π π π π π π
And ofc u’ll ace your NEET without a doubt! π π π π
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Of course there has to be! Somehow out of the blue I come to know that I have to sit for JEE also. I have absolutely no idea about the pattern or anything. It’s so unfair.
Plus, Aakash is taking tests every week. Oh no no, that’s an understatement. We are having a test every Sunday, Monday, Thursday. Loads of biology to memorise…
Ah, not ace. But I hope to get selected at least. Not interested, anyways.
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Yes I have heard about the immense kindness of our Aakash from my medical aspiring friends. π
Shut up. U’d get selected and u’d ace it.
Don’t worry much about JEE. Questions aren’t really tough. Just a calm mind u need which I didn’t have.π₯π₯π₯
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Beautiful poem !!
Touch the soul, touch the heart only then dare to touch the skin !!
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You got it there. That’s what I tried to convey in this poem. Thank you Cherry for your wonderful words. π π π π π
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That’s what I thought it to be βΊ
You are welcome sweets π«π«π«
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This is amazing poem!
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THANK YOU. π π π π
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You are indeed welcome!
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LOVE, LOVE, LOVE THE AMOUNT OF EMOJIS USED LOL
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Haha haha haha. Advantage of being on the phone. Using the opportunity as best as I can.otherwise it’s so not possible from the desktop. ππππ
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I do understand that completely! Lol
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Don’t worry about reading my post, I understand, take your time, although you already did ππ
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Yes yes. Why not? ππππ
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Well it’s up to you, I can’t prevent you reading mine because it’s so awesome πππ
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yes yes! It is! π π
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What a beautiful poem! Keep up the good work. Iβm sure youβll do well in your exams.π
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Thank u sooooo much for your encouraging and loving words, MG. ππππ
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Youβre very much welcome.ππ
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Nice poem dear…which entrance? ? I too have entrance in June. ..best of luck
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Thank you sooo much Sana.ππππβ€
I have my Engineering entrances. Done with class 12 boards. What about you?
And all luck and best wishes to you too. ππ
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I’m done with graduation..I have my entrance for post graduation
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Best of luck then Sana. Btw, wt’s your sub major?
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Microbiology
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Why do most girls have a penchant for Biology while I don’t? I really keep wonderjng! πππ
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It was my interest in biology…about others I don’t know
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I’ve nominated you for three days three quotes challenge…do check my blog…
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Sure Sana. Thank you for the tag. I’d make the post next month when I’ll be back to blogging after all my exams.
Really grateful for you being such a supportive person always.. β€β€β€β€
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Okay…all the best dear…wishing you all the success
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its soo emotional, makes me wanna bawl so bad π¦
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Oh my!!! I am touched by the effect it’s had on u didi…..Thank u so much for reading it.β€β€β€β€β€
P.s. don’t cry for long okkkkk????? ππ
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as you say sis, but it really was good, trust me β€
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All thanks to you didi. πππππ
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Wish You all the best Moni for your Exams, It’s really hard to be regular at blogging.. Reading the comments on your post feels like your blog has got good interactive followers.
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I am so sorry Amogh. I missed ur comment. Just been a bit busy with studies and haven’t been able to reply to all the comments. Yes. I do love to interact and comment on my fellow bloggers’ posts as well. Thank you loads for your support and well wishes.
Sorry again for the late reply. βΊβΊβΊβΊ
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Hey buddy π
I have nominated you for sunshine blogger award π₯
Please check it out here –
https://shewrites170.wordpress.com/2018/04/13/sunshine-blogger-award-%f0%9f%a5%87/
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Thank u Cherry. Thanks a lot. I am just stuck with my after boards joint entrances and it’ll be a little while till I can take up this award. Hope u won’t mind. I thank u loads and loads again.
Love and hugs! β€β€β€β€β€β€β€
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You are welcome Charisma π
I have been there and itβs really tough so all the best π
Take your time for the award post, not an issue.
You are welcome buddy π
Much love πππ
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Thank you for all the love, Cherry. β€β€β€β€β€β€β€
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Pleasureβs mine.
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Love this! It’s really good!! xx
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Thank you Sara. β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€
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You are welcome! xx
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I invite you to the β5Things I Like About Myselfβ challenge. Find out about it here: https://jannat007.wordpress.com/2018/04/15/5-things-i-like-about-myself/
Have a nice day.!
Blessings.πΈ
Xxx
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Hi Jannat I missed you. Been quite absent from WordPress lately. Studies taking away my time. π’π’π’π’π’
Thank you for the nomination about 5 things I love about myself. Thank you so much.
I’d try to make a little time and post it in the coming week.
Love and hugs all the way from India.
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Aww.π that’s so sweet.π
Pleasure is all mine. Looking forward to your post. π·π·π·π·π·π·π·π·π·π·π·π·π·
Xoxoxo.π
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And yes, I missseedddd you too.π· XxxππΌππΌππΌπππΌππΌπππ
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Your poems make me happy I swearπππ
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Where did you disappear my girl??? I missed you.
And I am so so so grateful that you read my poems. Love you loads. β€β€β€β€β€β€β€
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I’ve been busy π’πππ… I had college decisionsπ.
But I make time to read your poemsππ
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Baby girl is big now huh? All set for college? Even I am stuck with my entrance exams for college and it’s gonna last till the end of May. I’ve myself been absent from WordPress for quite some time and look, I am the one complaining. I donno how else to be grateful, my woman. Sorry for being such a bad friend who couldn’t even keep one request of yours to read your story. Okay lemme do the damage control rn. Will you please paste the link once again here? I will make it a point to finish it within the next week, my girl.
Love you loads. β€β€β€β€β€β€
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Brilliant poem
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