A lost enamour,

A broadly lit claustrophobic core,

It’s 2.a.m. or may be it’s already four.

I search the supporting arms for succour.

But all I find is the cold stony floor—-

Cut into pieces with the tears I bore,

The whites now sanguine with the bloody skin I tore;

The woundes—all festered and sore;

For I know not when I left the door,

Blaming myself to be a whore.

Or may be it’s you who did the chore.

For the thousand reasons and more,

We let our love leave life’s shore.

And now it’s just me and this core,

For we don’t talk anymore.

We don’t talk anymore.

No. Not anymore.

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So I’m done with boards yesterday and now I’ve got the JEEs!!!!!!!!!! This is just a manifestation of post-board tension relief aka half asleep consciousness when my mom was screaming at me to take a nap. I am so sorry for not replying to sooooo many lovely comments for the last one week. I’d try to from the Dashboard for half of them are now not even available in the notifications. And now I’m having this biggest problem ever from yesterday night: I can’t comment on any of your posts! Like till evening everything was okay and suddenly everything’s gone wrong! The only way I’m being able to comment is replying from the dashboard(and not even from the notifications!) Someone help me out for even Googling a solution didn’t help! 😦 😦 😦 😦 😦

P.S. I’ve been having this strange idea of writing a poem with only one rhyme and so here is it! πŸ˜›

EDIT: THANKS LOADS TO EVERYONE FOR YOUR SUPPORT. THE PROBLEM IS SOLVED NOW(I GUESS NANDITA‘S LUCK WORKED FOR ME! πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ )

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236 thoughts on “ENAMOUR

  1. Monorhymes!! I’m quite fond of them you know, although many think it sounds like rap.

    You did wonderfully, Moni ❀️❀️❀️

    And many congratulations on cracking the JEE. Yayayay! Super happy for you.

    And the glitch thing, I’m illiterate on such matters.

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    1. Cracking is sooooo far away. I need solid concentration and studying these last 15 days. Lol! But thank you Nandita. πŸ™‚ πŸ™‚ πŸ™‚
      And thank you again, My sweetest Nandita. ❀ ❀ ❀ ❀
      P.S. I am not able to comment on any posts other than my own and that too from the dashboard. I just saw your comment on My Poem but I am unable to reply on it. *sigh* *sigh* I need to chalk this out very soon! It's making me go all mad!
      P.S. I am fond of Linkin Park's Mike Shinoda's rap. πŸ™‚ πŸ™‚ πŸ™‚ πŸ™‚ πŸ™‚ πŸ™‚

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      1. Favourite? Most people who love Rap worship Eminem. Well his songs are so deep, so meaningful. I wouldn’t say I am some kind of die hard fan of Eminem but Love The Way You Lie is one of my favourites!

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      2. Yes yes I intend to try out more of NF’s song very soon. I’ve heard a few on VH1 but soon enough forgot the names. So i don’t have them on my phn yet. I’ll start mass-downloading once I get time. HE HE!!!😁😁😁

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    2. Nandita, now I might be getting spammed on your posts as well. I commented on 2 of your posts and they vanished!!πŸ˜”πŸ˜”πŸ˜”πŸ˜”πŸ˜”πŸ˜” I am getting tired of this Spam thing! Had to reply it here for the reason. I think I’ll start crying now!!!πŸ˜₯πŸ˜₯😩😩😭😭😭

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      1. No no Moni. Your comments are there
        The thing is my settings are such that all my comments go under moderation. And i just woke up.
        So worry not. You are still my sweet reader. And your comments always q treat 😘😘😘

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      2. Thank you so so so much. You are the Sweetest, Nandita!😘😘😘😘😘😘😘 I guess I am just freaking out a tad too much!!! Just waiting WordPress and Askimet to reply back!! πŸ˜₯πŸ˜₯πŸ˜₯πŸ˜₯

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    1. Oh no! Not anymore. Hey wow! I think I’m dedicating this post to Boards! Lol lol lol Great idea!
      P.S. THANK YOU. ❀ ❀
      And I read your 2 latest posts but like I said, I am unable to comment on any new blog post of My Followers or the ones I am Following

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      1. Everything is sorted suddenly and I am dancing on cloud nine! Ha ha ha!
        Silly ideas are wierd and best in their own ways, u see. πŸ˜€πŸ˜€πŸ˜€πŸ˜€πŸ˜€

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      2. I think I’ll die now. I am not being able to make comments on new posts again. I think I already tripped!😑😑😑😑😑

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      3. I just liked and commented on one of your posts. The comment got posted. I refreshed and then it disappeared! I’ve surely broken my leg from the trip!πŸ˜₯πŸ˜₯πŸ˜₯πŸ˜₯

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      4. Yuk yuk. I hate the app. I am seeing nothing on it now. And it’s showing No Connection in the app. So had to open browser again.πŸ˜₯πŸ˜₯πŸ˜₯πŸ˜₯πŸ˜₯😩😩😩😩😩😩😩😩😩😩😩

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      5. Not working from browser as well. Tried on your post. I guess i’ll just have to wait a bit. I am tired of trying now!😩😩😩😩😩😩😩😩😩😩

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      6. I see why you have such dark thoughts about regret when we were discussing about it. It is a beautiful poem though. And tbh, i’ve a penchant for these kind of poems. πŸ˜€πŸ˜€πŸ˜€ Please tell me you can see this commnt. I’ve tried to post rhis probably 10 times by now on Lost Things. And it’s not working.πŸ˜•πŸ˜•πŸ˜•πŸ˜•πŸ˜•πŸ˜•πŸ˜•πŸ˜•

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      7. I better do that. However the only blog on which I am able to comment is Nandita’s. I comment anywhere else. It just vanishes. I guess wordpress support is what i need now!πŸ˜₯πŸ˜₯

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      8. πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚ good option!!!!!!

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      9. Wait till I share the poem I wrote yesterday….a medley of physics and chemistry metaphors….u’ll be too afraid to run then…….so…..you better runnnnnnnnnnnnn!!!
        P.S. Just kidding! (Oh no, I’m not…strike that off!)

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      10. Okay so I need your help Bharath. I might be getting to the root of my problem. But will you please check and lemme know if you have any of my comments in the spam list???

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      11. No no no no nothing is sorted. I can’t comment on any new blog I visit coz I’ll get spammed for sure. How am I suppose to grow my blog??? I am tired of my comments not being answered for I know they’ve been spammed and not many would LOVE TO CHECK THEIR SPAMS daily!😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭

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      12. Yeh toh pagal GOT fan hai re vai….
        I have binge watched only 3 seasons though. Had to stop for my boards lol. (1 week and all 3 done…in Feb) i so very intend to continue it after Entrances. πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰
        P.S. wouldn’t u say The Lannister dwarf speaks intelligent? I thought u r learning from him! πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚

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      13. Just random crazy GOT Thoughts. coz u never know what’s gonna happen there and I am trying to implement the same. πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰

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      14. Kya spoilers doge? That Danny and Jon are cousins??? That Cersei the Evil will probably die of a stupid profecy? That the Tyrell house is gonna get destroed? That Danny will lose one of her dragons?

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      15. Ahhh u can’t give me GOT Spoilers!!!!!!!!!! I may have watched only 3 seasons. But I know half of the conspiracies that will bloom in all the coming seasons.
        That prophecy hints at Danny’s death, that Bran might be the WhiteWALKER’S King….etc etc etc etc! πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜›

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      16. Am I???πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚ WordPress is making me genius them. Had to submit a help request to WordPress and Askimet.com for this spamming thing!😁😁😁

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      17. Arrey arrey chhoti behna roo degi itni samman paake!!😭😭😭😭😭
        Mike k pass jake puchne k liye papa paise nei dene wale!πŸ˜œπŸ˜œπŸ˜œπŸ˜œπŸ˜‹πŸ˜‹πŸ˜‹

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    1. I was using desktoo till today morning. Mom has been so sweet with me to give me my phone back for the day. So currently I am online from my phone. But I guess it’s sorted now. I commented on numerous posts yesterday but none to the avail. And then I commented on one post….and yes…suddenly it was solved! I am just soooooooo happy!!!!!!!!! It’s solved now and I think i am dancing on cloud nine now!!πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚

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    2. And it isn’t solved again. I commented on your laziness post. Refreshed and there it was! No where to see! I think I’m ready to hit the site creators if they show up in front of me right now!

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    1. Oh yes half-independence for me lol!
      And thank you, my sweet little sister.πŸ˜™πŸ˜™πŸ˜™πŸ˜™πŸ˜™
      Btw, how has boards been with you? Did it play along faithfully????

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      1. Well!!! Partially!!!
        We’re the batch which is suffering!!!
        Actually full syllabus in 10th was 8 years ago and this year they started ….. And now from next year again half syllabus…. So it’s like Injustice…. Still…. I’ve capacity….so I’ll !!! 😭😭😭😭😭😭
        I didn’t had habit for full till 9th so it’s damn difficult to engulf 23 chaptersπŸ˜¦πŸ˜¦πŸ˜¦πŸ˜©πŸ˜©πŸ˜©πŸ˜”πŸ˜’πŸ˜’πŸ˜’πŸ˜²πŸ˜²πŸ˜²
        Anyway…. Have your freedom !! Live and enjoy:-*:-P

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      2. You know what??? We are the unlucky batch as well. From next year onwards, class 12th syllabus will be halved and here we are…..πŸ˜’πŸ˜’πŸ˜’πŸ˜’πŸ˜’πŸ˜«πŸ˜«πŸ˜«πŸ˜«πŸ˜«πŸ˜«
        Class 10 is especially tiring because of SST and SCIENCE. So many chapters!!! Just for one exam!!!!! But then CBSE is lineant to give us some 1 wk holidays in between as well!!!!!

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    1. Thank you so much, my Style Inspiration! 😍 ❀
      I’d someday check out all your posts and learn a little bit more about styling.πŸ˜™πŸ˜™
      Thank you loads.
      Well….I’ll however be off again for sometime as I’ll have to get through my Entrance exams. Ha ha! They’re tougher than the boards!😁😁😁😁

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  2. This is beautiful & sweet..bdw i like the caption too(JEE ka darrr after boardsπŸ˜‚)
    So i believe my lil sis will definately crack engg entrances too meanwhile do enjoy the freedomπŸ“šπŸ““πŸ‘ˆπŸ˜‚

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    1. Btw, I had tried to leave comments on a few of your posts ai read yesterday and today. I’m afraid they went into the spam. Strange things have been happening with this Spam thing. I am getting more reports from bloggers that my comments are being spammed. Had to sumbit a request in WordPress support and Askimet. And sorry for the late reply. I found this is in my Spam list. *digh* *sigh* I am getting tired of this new game wordpress is playing since yesterday.😩😩😩😩😩😩
      But thank you for taking your time and read it.😊😊😊😊😊 thank u loads.

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    1. Tbh, Sumedha this is probably the only poem I wrote without Googling a singke word. It was like a challenge to myself, that I’ll monorhyme and not search a single word. The only word you may say I half-googled is succour. I was writing another verse a few days before my Maths exam and Googled it (searching for a synonym for comfort)😁😁😁 So yeah half-googled! πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚
      But thank you loads and loads re.😘😘😘😘😘

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      1. Arrreyyyyy. Teri English bohot hi achhi hai. The few posts I read, I had to Google quite a few words re! I can only hope to be jealous of the amazing marks u r gonna get in English!πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚
        But oh! Courtesy accepted!😘😘😘😘

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  3. This is an interesting poem. Well written.

    Have been trying to post this comment for a while now. My internet has been quite foggy. I mean this free wifi that I am using. πŸ˜›

    And well, all the best for your JEE’s and other competitive exams you would be taking. And also best wished for the results. I know too soon, but since I was already wishing you the best of wishes, thought of adding this as well.

    Thanks for dropping by my blog as well. Really appreciate it. πŸ™‚

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    1. Errr….I am sorry I couldn’t comment on your blog. I had given up all tries after my comments were landing in people’s spam for Hell knows what reason. And it was tiring…this last 48 hours!πŸ˜₯πŸ˜₯πŸ˜₯
      Thank you so much for taking your time to visit my blog and leave such a lovely comment. Thank you loads for your well wishes,Enigma (an amazing choice of Blogname)
      I followed you to make sure I keep up with your posts (though I may fail at the task a little for my studies. Please don’t mind for that) I’d love to check out your enigmatic posts, Enigma.
      Thanks again.
      πŸ’•πŸ’•πŸ’•πŸ’•

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  4. Nice rhyming dear! So happy for you on your JEE. You open your blog on a laptop or PC. You click the My site. Check out the comments on the left side. I hope this helps. Some of the good comments always end up in the SPAM folder.

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    1. Arrreyyyy….Riddhima it’s absolutely alright. Don’t thank your sister sooo much. It’s been my pleasure to find my way to your bright thoughts. β€πŸ’•πŸ’“πŸ’œπŸ’›πŸ’šπŸ’™πŸ’–πŸ’—πŸ’˜πŸ’žπŸ’Ÿ
      And and Thank you for such a heart-felt comment, dear. 😘😘😘😘😘

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    1. I usually can’t help but rhyme. Rhyming is like a necessity for me. Although I love reading free verses, but I myself feel my poems are incomplete without a rhyme.
      Thank you loads.
      And well, you may try it out as well. It’s fun and a bit challenging. To rhyme without Googling one bit of a rhyme word! ❀ ❀

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      1. I try not to be lazy especially because I am not much experienced with poetry. I usually jot down a quick verse with some rhymes and then edit it sometime later. Otherwise, I’d end up leaving it in the middle! Lol lol.
        But thanx again! πŸ™‚ πŸ™‚ πŸ™‚ πŸ™‚ ❀ ❀

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    1. Thank you, Dreamy Reads. ☺☺☺☺
      My 8 year old sister has the same complain for my dad. He doesn’t allow us to watch tv more than 10 mins while eating because of my entrance. 😁😁😁😁

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