SINS AND FLOWERS

 

 

A darkened room,

Or perhaps your life’s doom.

A bleak face, a provoked sadness,

Desolate, in despair and distress.

An occasional broken tear,   

Trying to relinquish all the fear. 

A misunderstood purpose,

The world claims reality and you are in a hiatus.

 A general indifference,

Your words–all dismissed as nonsense. 

Immature are all your thought,

For they know not the battles you’ve fought.

For you, your life’s mundane,

For them, you’re just another bane.

 

 A lump of gluttony chokes your throat,

In the river of sins, your body’s afloat.

A voice trying to reach out,

But the orb’s burden suppresses the shout.

There’s little hope;

And yet,

There’s a ray through the crevices,

Trying it’s best to sneak out.

Trying to tell the world,

What you are:

A heart with a hole,

And still a flower in thy soul

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Hi people! How are you doing? Just happen to be on a break from exams. Thanx to CBSE for scheduling a week long holiday between Chemistry and Mathematics exam! HA HA!

Would love to hear from you again about this post. If I’ve missed any reply to your comments, pardon me please. I’ll try to keep up with them at best under my Boards exam vibes! More power to your pen, my dear Bloggers. 🙂 🙂 🙂 🙂 🙂 🙂 🙂 🙂 🙂

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189 thoughts on “SINS AND FLOWERS

    1. Well, you could try them out sometime. I’d surely love to read yours. 🙂 I used to think I can’t write poems and neither was I a huge fan of reading them. Blogging has indeed helped me grow. I saw a 100% increase in my love for poetry. I wrote about 20 poems in this 20 days or so…..which is so much more than I have ever written in my whole life. 🙂 🙂 Thanx to Rupi Kaur as well! 🙂 🙂 🙂
      And Thanx for the visit and well wishes. 🙂

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      1. Anytime. 🙂 Thank you for your encouraging words. 🙂 You really should try and don’t forget to let me know. I’d be more than just happy to read it. 🙂 🙂 🙂

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      2. 😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂
        My God! I seriously sound mad laughing so loud!!!!!!! Glad that my parents are not at home right at this moment. Had they been, they would surely find it peculiar. Lol lol!
        But u needn’t worry. I will pardon you from all my gyans and detective-work for the next few days and let boards engulf me. 😛 😛 😛 😛

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      3. Hai re meri laadli, mai toh mar gayi aapki cuteness mei!!!
        Emotionally ghuma reh ho??? Nei nei. Hum detective hai. Hum patne nei wale.😉😉😉😉

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    1. Advice? Anytime, Randezvous poems? Okay? I’ll try to advise you on that too, my dear lil’ sister. And thank you. 🙂 🙂 🙂 🙂 🙂 🙂
      Btw, so you’re in class 11?

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      1. You’re in Kota? You’re definitely brighter than my advices. 😛 😛 😛 Work hard all the year, medical can be tough.. Sometimes I never understand how you Bio folks memorise such wierd wierd names and difficult terms. Hum toh class 12 k Chemistry In Everyday Life mei hi maar kha gaye! Eww so ganda ganda names of all the medicines and compositions! LOL LOL LOL!

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      2. I live in Haldia, West Bengal. For the last 2 years, I’ve been a regular weekend visitor to Kolkata for my coaching at Aakash for Engineering. 🙂
        And about Physics, I kinda have a love hate relationship with it. It’s like, sometimes I am absolutely engrossed in the numericals, at other times, it’s a NO NO! Get away! Shooo shooo!! 😛 😛 😛 😛

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      3. I am basically from Kerala !! (M proud to say that I belong from God’s own country : Kerala) But as my father gets lots of transfer …so currently I live in M.P . Yeah ! Even I have a love hate relationship with phy … The fact is … I find phy interesting n even love doing numericals…. But marks hamesha physics m hi jata h 😂😂

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      4. Yeh baat sehi boli tune re chutki. 😂😂😂😂😂
        Oh Kerala must be very beautiful. I’ve been nagging my dad to take us on tours to Kerala. But we ended up going to Uttarakhand and Darjeeling(twice…in class 9 and 10) Ofc dad hasn’t allowed any outings these 2 years. Lol!
        Tell me, tu Kota mei rehti hai. Yeh ek saal, did you get to visit places?

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      5. My father isn’t really a traveler type !! But as my mom insisted ..( coz she lives travelling) we went for a Gujarat + diu trip when I was in 10th 😄…but Kota mein ….the whole year I was jus focused on studies.. I didn’t even used net !! …n yeah !! We gotta 1 month gap before 12th ..so here I am …after a long tym blogging ….the posts which I wrote last year .. but couldn’t post it 😄😄⭐

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      6. Toh tu serious nerd types hai!
        Mere saare dosts mujhe nerd bula te hai jabki dekh boards chal raha hai and still I am occassionally blogging. 😛 😛 😛 😛 😛
        I visited Gujarat when I was around 3 or 4 years old. I don’t even remember how it looks like. 😛 😛
        1 month gap hai…thora jee le. Firse toh studies ka pressure aa jayega and then 11th revision bhi coz by the time 12’s in, 11’s half out!

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      1. Yes !!!!!!Kind of stress burster .I feel relaxed and enlightened when i write.It will replenish and refresh myself.Can understand your passion for writing.More than a passion you write for yourself.Very nice and very rare be like that.Good job.But have a balance with your studies as well.

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  1. Totally Beautifulllllllllllllll

    I’ve been thinking about this the whole day… It’s tots awesome

    And I’m kinda jumping aimlessly in my room rn… I’m Walter freakin O’brien!!!!!!!!

    The ultimate mindblower… I found the comment section… Yaaaayyyyy😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍

    *sprinkles confetti in the air and tries to catch each falling flake with my tongue*

    I’m a genius, right?

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    1. I donno if I should be grateful or just laugh out at 1a.m. in the night, when both my parents and my siso are asleep!
      Oh my! You’re so damn genius! You found the comment box and now u r catching falling confetti with your tongue? Your IQ is probably 200 or something for sure!!!!!!!!!!!!!

      And yes, thank you so so much. You did make me smile, and then suddenly out no where I started laughing half way down your comment. 😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂
      And btw, Miss One Hell Of A 17 year old Badass Woman, what do I call you by?
      🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔

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      1. You could be all… Grateful, laugh out loud and wake all of them up with my awesomeness👯👯👯

        Ikr!!!!! Like with my IQ I should take over Virgin Atlantic so the leadership will have passed from one genius to another😍😍😍 💪

        I’m McKenzie😇 but I kinda like the Badass reference 😂😂😂

        And you are?

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      2. I am Manidipa, just a year older than you and I am from India.
        You can call me Moni, My One Hell Of a 17 Year Old Badass Woman(I think I’ll stick to it instead of McKenzie)! 😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂
        Oh yes! You’re like overflowing your brain with your IQ! Please donate some of it to me as well. PLEASEEEEEEE????????

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      3. Awwwww…….i am just waiting till i get the time to read your Wattpad story!!!!😙😙😙 you are sweet, interesting and every hell (or may be heaven?) of an amazing person!!!!!

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      4. I am so happy that WordPress brought us together but i’ll kill the moderators if my current problem exists. You see any new blog i visit or even reply on the posts of bloggers i follow, every single of my messages is spammed and not many check their Spam daily! I am tired of replying only on my posts. I need to comment on others posts as well. It’s killing me.😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔
        My Badass Lady, btw, I shared a monorhyme poem on my blog. And I wrote a Haiku as you inspired me to. I’d share it soon. Thanks for all the encouragement you gave me.😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘

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  2. Speechless 🙄. I just loved this one. Can’t wait to follow your writings more!!
    You are writing before maths!? All my literary prowess (however little) cowers in at the mere mention of the devil. I hope your chemistry was fine though!! Not to mention the infamous physics!!

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    1. Hawking sir didn’t help me before leaving us!
      Yeah Chemistry was way better! Like seriously good.
      Writing? Oh I am so very indulging in my 1 week holiday! LOL LOL LOL!
      And thank you so so much. ❤ ❤ ❤

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      1. I find many well, mostly because my tastes are very varied. Say songs for eg, you’d hardly find anyone, who’s a die hard fan of LP and at the same time enjoys Pop(a die hard fan of Taylor Swift songs), EDM(I can’t survive without Garrix) and at the same time listens to bands like BFMV and Breaking Benjamin and enjoys rap and even Bolly romantic and wedding beats! Phew! That’s a long list!
        Oh and you’re the first I came across on WordPress who’s totally into LP just like me! 🙂 🙂 🙂 Glad to meet you too. 🙂 🙂

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      2. I listen to everything but I’m a sucker for classic rock. Led Zeppelin, Bon Jovi, Pink Floyd and Beatles. I love pop too. EDM with vocals are appealing to me.

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    1. You understand me so very well, Ayesha! Thank you sooooooo much for your loving words! 🙂 🙂
      And yes, I’m glad too for finding my way to your blog. 🙂 For now I know my writing skills will improve as well.(U write sooo well and your vocabulary is really commendable) 🙂 🙂 🙂 🙂 🙂 🙂

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      1. You are beautiful and awesome in your own kind of way, Ayesha. ❤ ❤ ❤ ❤ ❤
        Don't thank me soooo much. Take me as your friend and friends don't say thank you so very often for compliments. ❤ ❤ ❤ ❤

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    1. Thank you Nandini. 🙂 🙂 That’s really sweet of you. ❤ ❤ ❤
      I do remember checking out your blog via the First Friday Post. And yes, I'd love to interact with you on your blog as well. Would you please turn on the comment feauture, I mean that is if you want to! ❤ ❤ ❤ ❤

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      1. But I still couldn’t see the comment section. Anyways the picture are really amazing! Ofcourse, the place is amazing! We passed Devaprayag en route to Kedarnath. 🙂 🙂 And that was in the very same year the flash floods struck the place, some 15 days after we returned from our trip. 🙂

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  3. It’s sooo beautiful!
    “A misunderstood purpose,
    The world claims reality and you are in a hiatus.
     A general indifference,
    Your words–all dismissed as nonsense. 
    Immature are all your thought,
    For they know not the battles you’ve fought.
    For you, your life’s mundane,
    For them, you’re just another bane.

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  4. Hi. It was a beautiful poem, loved it!!! Btw I’m so sorry to flood you with likes and comments all at once, but I couldn’t stop myself…!!!!!! Sooooo relatable Moni Di!!!! 🙂

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