FADED WISHES

FADED WISHES— A POEM ABOUT LOST LOVE

And from where I sit in my balcony,

I see him standing across the lane,

Making a conversation with Bethany,

And upon my lips, a smile came;

For she’s just a friend,

And I am?

His bestfriend.  His girlfriend.

 

Sometime later,

I see her leave,

I do let out a silent heave

For I know she’s better than I can ever be.

And yet,

I find him approaching towards our porch,

In no time I am running down the stairs,

At the speed of rocket launch.

The bell sounds, the door I let open,

And the adrenaline rush makes me go inane.

By the door he leans,

I see my prince charming in him,

Wearing those faded blue jeans,

Making me ponder—am I really HIS?

 

We leave for a walk by the river

Coz I’ve heard him say to many other—

It’s my favorite place to be with her.

So with the wind against our face,

Our fingers intertwined like knotted shoe lace,

His thumb brushed against knuckles of mine,

And I knew it right then,

He’ll always make me feel this fine,

He’ll forever and always be mine.

For the future we plan for us together,

Holding on to each other forever,

Realizing how perfect we are for each other.

 

Suddenly he lets go of my hand,

And I see him removing the LOVE Band,

I panic and ask him why?

Trust me, YOU don’t wanna see me die!

And then he starts to run.

I try, I follow, I run.

But it’s no longer our childhood’s Hop and Catch fun.

As he moved further away,

I see him waning away.

I scream out his name

And I realize it’s all in vain.

For I find myself

Holding on to my teddy,

Which on my 12th birthday,

He gifted to me himself.

I let out a sigh,

And then I hug my teddy again, bursting out into a cry.

For I couldn’t let go of my Imagination,

Craving for his touch, a temptation;

I cry louder in frustration,

But now it’s all a devastation

Coz his death was an end to my own creation.

~~~~~~  MANIDIPA

 

 

My take on today’s daily prompt word: Imagination. I know it might sound cliché and all. But I’d love to believe in the power of imagination which lets us live in a world which can’t be ours. May be it once used to be, but not any more.

Also I owe my inspiration to the numerous love songs I started listening to at the age of 13(well particularly TAYLOR SWIFT and JUSTIN BIEBER). U might be able to relate the first part of this poem as a picture from SWIFT’s “YOU BELONG WITH ME”. Also my inspiration comes from Shawn Mendes’s IMAGINATION song and last but not the least my fellow bloggers who write such beautiful poems and have encouraged me to keep on writing with my individuality intact. So a big thanx to all of you. 

Do leave a feedback on what you feel about this poem.

FEATURE IMAGE: Errrr… credits to my hand and my neighbor’s garden. LOL!

Also, if you like this poem, you may look through the other POEMS I have put up on my blog.

 

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252 thoughts on “FADED WISHES

    1. Thanks a lot for taking your time to read my poem. It means a lot. I really admire your work. And you are an inspiration, like many other of my fellow bloggers are. Thank u again for encouraging me. 🙂 🙂

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  1. Reading through the comments I hardly have a word to add edgewise. Otherwise, from a personal point of view, I have loved love from a young age. Love is the most beautiful emotion and sometimes best premise for the most beautiful poems, such as FADED WISHES. As a cynic now, even though I’ve found my Twin Flame, love as what it implies is still cherished, and that’s why the ending to your poem dredges up long lost emotions. 🙂 cherish your imagination and make it blossom and bloom for the world to experience and acknowledge!!! 😀

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    1. This makes my day, Gawie(I assume that’s your name or is it just a blog name?). 🙂 🙂 😊😊😊😊😊😊 Yeah love is a feeling to be cheerishes, to be lived for and to revel in. For something Robert Frost said about love and I firmly believe in “Love is an irresistible desire to be desired irresistibly”
      Thanks for reading it. Well may be a thanks is just not enough for the message you left. It just lift my mood up. Many thanks. Let’s be in love and cherish it! ❤️️❤️️❤️️❤️️❤️️❤️️❤️️❤️️

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    1. Yes I know that feeling…..being in Love and Swift’s songs to make u feel in love….that teenage feeling of being deeply, badly, and madly in love(well I’m still a teen, just 18…ha ha!!!)
      And thank u for taking out your time and reading it. 🙂 🙂 🙂 🙂 🙂 🙂 🙂 🙂

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      1. I’m glad that you’ve kept your sense of wonder and optimism in an age most people are unsure of pretty much everything. I hope it stays and you’re welcome. Looking forward to reading more of your wonderful posts. Xx

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      2. Optimism drives me…no matter how gloomy situations are, losing optimism would mean losing your hopes for something better and that’s my driving force. Well, no one should ever lose hope. 🙂 🙂 🙂 And it was my pleasure. 🙂 🙂 🙂

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    1. Many thanks,(err…..what do I call u? Duskalert?) 🙂 🙂 🙂 🙂 I’m glad u visited my blog and read my poem. Thanks. 🙂 🙂 I’d be back with my new posts right after my exams. Till then keep writing and have a great day. 🙂 🙂

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      1. The thing is…just after I wrote the comment, I checked this link out(before u wrote it in the comment) and found out your name. So once again Hi Jannat. 🙂 🙂 Oh and best wishes for your SAT. U’ve opted for the essay and the subject tests? Ok we twin on a lot of points: I like to carefree and independent. I’d probably be bragging but I prefer to work hard as well and happen to be a “GOOD STUDENT”. And I too have wishes of living in the stone houses…kinda that old age feeling, u knw? Castles and houses, roads and pavements…of cobblestones and others? 🙂 🙂 🙂 🙂 🙂

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      2. Aww.😚 that’s so sweet of you.😊 Love to have you reading it.
        That is so strange that our thoughts are so similar. Are you a taurus? 😀 I laaave stone houses, I don’t why and how I started liking them but there’s something peaceful and attractive about ’em. Yes I gave SAT with essay. It’s a difficult task, you know the preps n all.. 😢

        Lovely meeting you.! 😍💖

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      3. Though I wouldn’t be sitting for it, I was going through the SAT syllabus and papers. Yeah, like the sites said, SAT did require a lotta prepration. So best of luck with that. 🙂 🙂
        I think my love for the stone houses arose from one of the English novels(can’t make sure which one in particular)…that’s probably the most plausible reason. 🙂
        It’s wonderful to meet someone who is at some other corner of the world and yet so very like yourself. 🙂 🙂
        Oh and btw, I am Libra. Although if I go by the Bengali Rashi(rashi would mean Zodiac sign), I am SINGHO RASHI(i.e. Leo)

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      4. Okay! Then you’re Leo, right, so it means you’re stubborn and intelligent. My liitle sister is also leo, so I’m pretty sure about it. 😊
        And as for the for stone houses, I started liking ’em after I saw a turkish drama…I know it’s bit cheesy but..😄😉😋
        Good to meet you.!
        Looking forward to explore more about you through your blog.

        Blessings.🌸
        Xoxoxo.💖
        Jannat

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      5. It’s like in English I am Leo and in Bengali I am Libra. XD! XD! People say I am intelligent but urgggghhh!!! I am not!! But Stubborn…yeah very very very very very. 🙂 🙂 🙂 🙂 Do u btw take ur Zodiac signs so seriously? ha ha ha ha 😛 😛 😛 😛
        Yeah a little cheesy is alright sometimes, right?? haha!!
        Loads of Love, I am realllllllyyyyyyyyy glad to meet u, Jannat. I’ll check out ur blog top to bottom once my exams are over. 🙂 🙂 🙂

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      6. Hahahaa😂😂 true that. A little cheesy sometimes is all okayy.😁😁
        Aww.😚 that’s sooo sweeettttt of you, Manidipa. Same is with me, I’m sooo HAPPPYYY to meet a person like you. Found a good friend in you. Blogging seems to be more special to me from now. 💖💖 love you, Xoxoxo.💖
        And yes, I’m also looking forward to explore your blog more.😊🌸🌷🌼💖

        Btw, have u checked out my category cloud right at the bottom of my blog. I’ve added stickers to my categories..”Being Cheesy” 😁😁😂😂
        Lolol.

        Manidipa, give a read to this link and do mention ur date of birth. There’s one category named, Blogger’s birthdays, it’s just a sort of an appreciation post kinda thing to thank my followers for likes, comments and followships.
        https://jannat007.wordpress.com/2017/11/18/appreciation-post-%f0%9f%98%8a/

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      7. First and foremost, I’d relieve you of your trouble to write such a huge(really? yes yes 8 letters!! toooo big!!!) name everytime you want to use it in the comments, And since you’re my friend now, call me Moni instead, like all my friends do. 🙂 🙂 🙂
        I think I’d take a little inspiration from you and write a post on BEING CHEESY someday(date, time, month, year uncertain…thanx to my Physics for making me go insane and write with such absurdity! Lol!)
        And yes I promise to do a top to bottom spy, speculate, stalk (any other words to add? Tell me, you’re in SAT preparation, your vocabulary’s definitely far better than the famished one of mine), etc etc etc of your blog once I get rid of my LOVER(Exam? Lover? really???? Ewww!!!!😃😃😃😃😃)
        Btw your birthday is not that far away!!!! Cheers to your near-completing one year of adulthood! HA HA HA HA!!!!
        And I am reallly looking forward to have some hearty conversations with you. U available on any other social media?
        ❤️️❤️️❤️️❤️️❤️️❤️️

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      8. Aww.😚 that’s so sweet of you Moni..(that sounds so good.😀)
        Btw, thenkew so much for giving me the right to call u by your nickname, people usually don’t like strangers to call them by their personal pet names.,.so Thanks much.! 💖💖💖 #Justfriendsthing😁🌷..right.?

        Yeah, it’ll be a fun to read that post. Do that soon…(once you get free from exams)) 😊

        It’ll be my honour to have YOU reading it. Love u for the interest you’ve shown towards my blog.. thanku so so much darling.!! Xxxx🌷🌷🌷🌷

        Yayyy. My birthday is on 23 April..I laaave birthdays..the preparations, celebritions..I love the care, concern and love people show towards you on a birthday..that is exceptional. Lol😂

        And yesss,..same here..waiting for you to get free from exams so that we can chat more often…’Heart-to-Heart Conversation’🌷🌷💮💖💖

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      9. Moni is just the shorter version of Manidipa dear. All my friends call me so. If u wanna call me by my nickname, call me Liza. That’s kinda the official nickname my parents gave me and most of the people in my extended family call me Liza. You may as well, Jannat. And thanks for all the well wishes for my exams.
        Loads and loads of love!! 🙂 🙂 🙂 🙂 🙂
        ❤ ❤ ❤ ❤ ❤ ❤

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      10. Oh okhay. Okayy.😁
        Moni…hmm,..Liza (let me think first.,..lololss😂😂)
        You know wuaaattt, both sounds pretty good. I’ll call u Moni Liza…that’s pretty much good, right ? 😀😀
        Have a lovely weekend darling.! 💖💖💖💖💖💖
        Xoxoxo.💖

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      11. As you wish, My Lady. How are you? How’s everything going? Hope your life’s going on better than being stuck in exams(na na don’t think I’m complaining about my exams, absolutely not. You see I call them “MY EXAMS”, I love them so much! XD!)
        ❤ ❤ ❤ ❤ ❤ ❤ ❤ ❤

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      12. Hahahaa😂😂..you’re so funny.🌸
        Btw, I’m giving entry tests so we’re pretty much going through the same phase.😀
        Yes, I’m absolutely fine.😊 How’re you?. How’s life treating you?🌷
        Xoxoxo.💖

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      13. Oh My poor poor Lady, exams again?
        Ha ha. Okay, best wishes and love from Haldia to you. Ace them. You’d surely do. 🙂 🙂 🙂 🙂 🙂 🙂
        Oh life’s good. I just happened to have Chemistry yesterday and it did go well, giving that I was able to sleep for 2 hours on the night before, a first in these 2 years of chemistry studying for school, I think I am quite well off. 🙂 🙂 🙂
        So what are your entry tests for?
        And thank you for noticing my weird and weird and sooo soo weird sense of humor. LOL LOL!
        LOVEEEEEEEEEEEE ❤ ❤ ❤ ❤ ❤

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      14. Hahaa😂😂
        You know what? I love talking to you. 🌷Xxx

        Best of luck for your result. Insha Allah you’ll ace it, as you’re already the ‘intelligent’ one! 💖

        Hmmm…I’m giving entry tests for Bba, like basically for business related degrees…and I’ve my other priorities also as second, third options. Because of the unpredictability of the tests and esp the results..llolllss😁
        Do pray for me.
        LOVE, LOVE, LOVE.💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖

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      15. All my prayers and wishes and love for you, Jannat. 🙂 🙂 Nothing can beat hard work and perseverance and I am sure you’ll pass your tests with flying colours. And why not? You’re intelligent as well. 🙂 🙂 🙂 🙂
        So you want to pursue business studies in uni?
        And if I haven’t mentioned it before, lemme do so now, I absolutely love our conversations. You’re really an amazing person. I am really glad you stopped by my blog one day and decided to comment. 🙂 🙂 🙂 🙂 🙂 🙂 🙂

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      16. 🙂 🙂 🙂 🙂 🙂 🙂 🙂 🙂 🙂
        😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍
        ❤️️❤️️❤️️❤️️❤️️❤️️❤️️❤️️❤️️❤️️❤️️❤️️❤️️❤️️

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      17. Moni I’m really happy to meet you at a time when I need the faithful readers for my blog. So I’ve found a good friend and a lovely follower for my blog.
        I’m happy beyond words. 😀💖💖💖💖🌷

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      18. Arrreeyyyyyy, I said na……Don’t sound thankful so much My Lady. 🙂 🙂 🙂
        Anytime, for you dear. You are such an amazing person to have conversations with. 😘😘😘😘😘
        I’m so glad that I can help u in some way or the other. 🙂 🙂

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      19. 😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘

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      20. Tbh, Miss Jannat’s latest layout looks better and more organised than the previous one. 🙂 🙂 🙂
        Seems like Pink is definitely your fav colour. 🙂
        Try out solid colours from the Palette as well and see if they suit your eyes. 🙂 🙂 🙂 🙂 🙂

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      21. Lols,😛
        Pinks happens to be my one of the favourite colors because of the feeling it gives…you know the positivity you feel by seeing it. It looks good to eyes.
        Yeah sure. I’ll try them as well.
        💖💖💖💖💖💖💖

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      22. Yes, I just saw your blog page. It’s good to change theme and customised a bit. It’s good for eyes. Isn’t it?
        I like the dark shade you added! Lovely.
        I think you like dark, bright colors.😀 isn’t it?
        💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖

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      23. Haaaawwwwww…..u understand me so very well! Yes, I love vibrant colours! They infuse so much positivity, energy and vivacity! Probably one of the reasons I am SOOO CHEERFUL(ERRR JUST WONDERING!) 😛 😛

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      24. Board exams were good. But yesterday’s exam scores will be a little below expectations. I made loads of silly mostakes. I’d qualify for the next round though. But i am a little upset for it not being upto expectations.

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      25. Yeah, I know a few words of hindi. But can’t fully understand it, I mean the pure hindi.
        Yes, you’re right I also love shayari, you know the feel it gives, so real, so pure. But can’t do it myself.😀

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      26. You’ve asked me a difficult question Jannat. I can’t chose a favourite it’d be really difficult.
        However I can tell that the last one I watched was Pink and the dialogues, the strength in the plot, the theme….it’s powerful. I enjoyed and appreciate every bit of the film. 🙂 🙂

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      27. Oh wow, that’s definitely I’m gonna watch.
        Btw, can I find it on YouTube. I mean the full movie?
        Tell me the app for movies, you know the one that causes ‘the least buffering’ I know it’s impossible. But you get my point, right? 😁

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      28. Yes yes I absolutely get your point Jannat. It’s tough watching a movie online without even 1 buffering session.
        Although not very many films are available on Youtube in very good quality, you are lucky honey. Pink’s available. Check if this link works:

        Just set the quality to a the highest or even medium will do.

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      29. U got the first one right. I live in India but not Mumbai(would have filled my blog with sea shore pictures if I had been, lolol!! 😂😂 just kidding) I live in Haldia which is in state West Bengal. I am a Bengali, as my full name would suggest: Manidipa Das. 🙂
        And I’d thank u for this comment a lot. Just realized after reading it that I forgot to enable the comments for my About page(or any other page for that matter) Also thank u for taking your time and reading it. 🙂

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      30. Hahaha😂😂😂 atleast I got the one right.
        Ohkay…so post some pictures of Haldia as well. Okay, so after writing this comment, I’m definitely going to Google about Haldia.😀.. you know.. the nosy type I .am😁

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      31. That doesn’t make u nosy, Jannat. 🙂 🙂 It’s just a town on the banks of river Haldi. If u’ve done ur research by this town, u’d know that the town mainly survived by KPT, IOC, Exide, Tata Petrochemicals and a now obselete HFC. So my father happens to be a senior chemist in IOC and the river is some 300 mtrs distance from where I sit in our quarter. 🙂 🙂 🙂 🙂
        And yeah, will surely post pictures of Haldia. 🙂 🙂

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      32. Ohkay.. so wikipedia tells exactly what you’re saying😀 So it’s mainly a port city. Good to know that.😊
        Yeah do that soon. I’ll love it. Blogging is so good, it helps you meet so many different people, living in different countries, with different cultures. You get to know so much about people. Love it.!!!! And esp to meet a person who is same of ur age, it’s so special and the connect it creates is even more stronger. 💖

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  2. I love it.. so so much! You’re a natural. I love how you played with the words and how the rhymes sound at intervals. It makes it so beautiful to read. There’s nothing to say, really! ❤ It’s perfect.
    PS. Kind of made me cry hahah 😅 It’s just so beautiful.

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    1. Oh my!!!! This makes me blush and smile and repeat. Thank you soooooo much. 🙂 🙂 🙂 🙂 Like I said about feeling the same way about you, you do pour out your heart even in your comments. This made my day tbh!!! Thank you Latifa(may I address you by your name? You can call me Moni btw.) 🙂 🙂 🙂
      😊😊😊😊❤️️❤️️❤️️❤️️❤️️❤️️

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    1. Ha ha not as good as you are Sumedha. Hai ami Bangali. 🙂 🙂 🙂
      Yeah TS knows to create the perfect romantic background for her songs! Tim Graw being one of her best country songs!
      And thank you again. ❤ ❤ ❤

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      1. Ami Bangali gorbe gorbito, ami gorbito ami bangali! ha ha! 🙂
        I hope staying staying in North India you haven’t forgotten the amazing tastes of ghoroya bangali khaor?

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      2. I’m more of a chingri machher malai curry and shorshe ilish (mustard shouldn’t be bitter) girl. Though I absolutely enjoy the occasional kosha mangsho and the plethora of flavours that burst in the mouth.
        But I’ve got to say this and I’ll be ever so thankful if none of my parents ever read this: I’ll any day prefer butter chicken or even Rahman chaval over machher jhol. Yeah but mangsho tops ’em all!!
        What’s your favourite?

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      3. There there! Did I just clean forget about Chingrir malaikari and any dish of Ilish????? So so so so so wrong of me! It’s just that aaj porikkha sesh bole ma khasir jhol baniyechilo. ha ha! Finding a favourite is so damn difficulty. I wouldn’t know which plate I’ll choose if someone served me a Bengali thali or Biriyani! I mean! PLease! NO NO, I can’t choose!
        BUT NEVER WAS AND NEVER EVER WILL BE A FAN OF RAJMA CHWAL!

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      4. Nooooo not a fan of Rajma chawal either trust me!! I’ve only had it like twice or thrice and that too on finding myself trapped by a plethora of weird vegetarian dishes. The point was to emphasie my UTTER dislike for Maacher jhol 😫😫

        Aaah, end of exam feast!! The prospects!! 🤤🤤

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      5. You wish!!!! Just one day feast!!!!
        Why do probasi Bangalis hate machher jhol so much? I have this best girlfriend of mine jake ami boli “Bangalir namey kolonko” just because she hates (and she absolute hates) any kind of fish! Not even chingrir malaikari!!!😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑 or ilish machher paturi or sorse ilish or any dish for that matter!!!😕😕😕

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      6. Hey I take offense on the basis of all probashi’s!! 😂😂 There are many who like Machher jhol….
        As far as I’m concerned, I can’t stand the jhol… Maach is fine. You know, deep fried 😋😋😋

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      7. So!!! Hi hi hi hi hi! My fellow probasi BANGALI! Kemon holo tor maths? I so very hope Bio is chewing all u medical folks’ head! Lol Just kidding! I know u must be studying hard!
        Maths was good. But I made a mistake in one of the probability sum. 😦 😦 😦

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      8. Haha. I made tons on mistakes. Didn’t convert hours to minutes in the LPP thing. I have terrible exam phobia 😫
        Psst( Delhi University just considers the marks of 4 subjects, so I’m probably okay. Whew.)
        Oh by the way…. HAPPY INDEPENDENCE DAY!!! Now, go study for JEE 🙄

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      9. Lol! Independence day is soooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo far away!
        That must have made the sum even worse, you wouldn’t have got the graph so easily then!
        So you aspire for DU?

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      10. You talk about your independence???? We have JEE on the 15th, then NEET, then AIIMS then JIPMER.
        And you know what the funny thing is…. I got the graph willy nilly…. Just off by a factor of 60 😂😂😂.
        And every single person who doesn’t want JEE or medical, aspired for DU. So yeah….. What about you? IIT?

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      11. I had a little of gyan sona from my daddy today in the car….after coming out of the exam hall. I have IIT as my most-important(read as only) choice. Private is like a NO NO for him. Firstly there aren’t any super-bumper private colleges in Bengal and my dad won’t send me outside Bengal. And the cost is definitely the other factor.
        You’ve opted for Online JEE I suppose. For I have mine on 8th.

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      12. Yup, online it is. But I have no idea even about the pattern of the thing. I am cutting a sorry figure one after the other in boards…. Let alone JEE. Even my father has a problem with private… That’s why DU. He so wanted me to go to Jadavpur (he’s from there) but I staunchly put down my foot for I am not keen on staying in Kolkata (No offence). So you’re aiming for Kharagpur then, I assume. I’m sure you’ll get it.
        Likewise, even my dad has issues sending me away from Delhi. Bengali parents are overprotective!!

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      13. No I visit every year! I just love wandering the streets…. Especially binging on Kobiraji cutlet and cheap in college Street after an exhausting day of picking out books!! I do love the city. Absolutely love it for a retreat. But you know, having stayed in Delhi my whole life, I find Kolkata a bit too slow for my taste. You know, everything is relaxes (which is most of the times a good thing).
        I don’t know if you’ve ever visited Delhi… Unfortunately, I don’t think I can say that you’ll love it.. it can get toooooo boisterous sometimes….

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      1. Awww thank you.😍😍😍 I know i haven’t tried commenting on yours because I have given up the try right now. But you have a beautiful way of penning your thoughts.❤❤ I so wish I could leave my comments. But I’ve been having this problem ever since yesterday like I mentioned in my post. Lemme get it fixed first.😍😍😍😍

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    1. Thank you Amogh. And please no ji?? Please??? I know u meant all your respect but err….how do i put it….it sounded a bit wierd. Sorry no offence please. Thank you for taking your time and visiting my blog. Really appreciate it. 😊😊😊

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      1. Actually most of the bloggers are elder to me, So If it’s a foreigner I would say Sir/Mam. If from our country I would say ji for most efficient writters. And Bhai, yaar, di itna toh chalta hei. Because from the beginning many of them have supported me by helping me grow and it was like a family. A WordPress family. But nowadays most of them are so busy may be with their lives

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      2. I am not sure if u r older or younger than me, but you may call me Moni.
        And yes ofc, WordPress is like a family now for me as well….just around 2 months into it and I have already found myself accepted as a member here.☺☺☺☺

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      3. If you are 19, 20 or upto 22 I can say Yaar if it sounds good.. as a gap of 3 to 4 years doesn’t matter. But if your writings are so professional I would probably have to put “ji” as a little more respect

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      4. You don’t think so, but I have been on WordPress since two years and I haven’t seen anyone with such a good following in just 2 months and just wait for a few months you’ll realise if I’m not wrong

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      5. I’d however owe my success to interaction with bloggers. But thank u Amogh for believing in me.
        2 years is quite a long time eh? Well may be i’ll get to learn loads from u then. ☺☺☺☺

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  3. Hi Moni
    I saw you liking my post abhi. Just wanted to let you know I’ve been harassed so much that I’ve closed my comments section for now. Happy to see you back. Miss your words. Lots of love to you.

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    1. It’s alright Nandita.😘 I just wish for the best for you. And for all your haters, let them be the way they are. If someone is so good at something the only reason they shower their hatred is jealousy. Never let them rule you. Just keep being the amazing person you are. And as long as I get to read your posts, I’m satisfied.☺☺☺☺
      Loads of love, Nandita.😘
      ❤❤❤❤

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  4. Loved this poem. Keep writing more of them. When I read that first part, he talking to someone else, I thought maybe the poem would end on a depressed note, about betrayals, about unrequited love, broken hearts….and what not!!!??? Though it’s not a happy ending and is in a way about broken hearts but not the way I had thought. Love your creativity, and thumbs up to your imagination!! I read some of your posts and I just loved all of them. 🙂

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    1. You are so good with the analysing. You know what? I actually thought about writing it as a betrayal poem. The first part might be an indication. But then I went with the flow and let death take the role in this poem!
      You like read all of my works and I can’t thank you enough dear! It means so much to me that you gave so much time to read what I wrote! I know we just met but thank you loads and loads Tisha! Love ya loads! ❤ ❤ ❤ ❤ ❤

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      1. Thanks Moni 🙂 but whatever you thought of writing, I dunno but what you ended up with is equally interesting and emotional!!!
        And yes, my pleasure!! But u don’t have to thank me dear, I really had a wonderful time at your blog and enjoyed reading your posts!!!
        Yeah….we just met but some friends are destined to be the best of friends, no matter how much time they’ve spent with each other!!!! Lol!!! 😀 😀
        Lots of love to you too 🙂

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      2. You make me emotional girl! ❤ ❤
        Loads of love to you.
        We just met and you are already being super sweet! Thanks for being such an amazing person with so much patience as to read my posts. (okay I thanked you again! 😛 😛 😛 )

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